- Creative Poetry -

Okay, so this is just a narrative poem I had to make. this poem is a rhyming poem that I had called "I Believe." here it goes. Oh and tell me if its good. (:

I woke up in the dark of day
and all i did was slowly pray
I glanced so hard upon the sky
laying down preventing me to cry
I had the feelings of a child
which made me act so crazy and wild
I wished for light as bright as sun
as well as this dreadful day to be done
I believed it would be on its way
but nothing happened it was all delay

I closed my eyes and hoped it'd come
a riskful thing had come along
I heard myself scream for help
but no one helped me just myself
I saw the sky fading from blue to black
it was sharp heavy thunder coming back

I waited wisely worrying so whack
I expected not to get attacked
I felt the shock against my leg
It was like a sharp needle and persuaded me to beg
I begged for hope and craved belief
I looked once more and saw relief
I saw sun smile which made me see
the greater faith I had in me

I gagged great grief before I walked towards
I looked more past just for the rewards
I quickly forgot the messy day I've had
I was so impatient to be glad
I knew I had the hope inside
It took great thought just to abide
I listened softly within my heart
It took me here for a fresh start

I thanked the lord so very much
I ended the day with a simple touch
I believed so hard for this to come
I have nothing to worry since this days done.

-Allan Razon

geez, this poem took me hours, lmfao. hahaha.